Disney's representation of female agency in Star Wars

These images are from essay peer review assignments. One image is showing my advice to one of my peers and the other image is advice that I received from a peer. During peer review, I had to leave my feelings behind and read my peer's advice from a critical standpoint in order to improve my work. After being told by many peers that I did not adequately explain Disney's influence, I revised my introductory paragraphs to include Disney's impact on social constructs. While giving advice, I had to make sure to try my best to analyze their literary elements and tell the writer my opinion on their work. Although it was tough, I had to tell one of my peers that her body paragraph did not contain crucial elements. Without these elements, her argument was much weaker. Throughout the quarter, I have improved my peer review skills through practice. After continuous practice, I have strengthened my ability to judge writing subjectively and give my best advice to writers in an effort to help them strengthen their work.